SI 10
Material: canon a630
Idea: Beginning this piece, I will focus on the concept of hope, which is the positive side, gradually shifting away from the negative emotions and expressions that were present before. This piece mainly symbolizes my escape from parental control and the attainment of freedom and hope.
Idea: I embody hope and freedom through an upward perspective, and to complete the composition of the photo, I placed tree branches within it. By adding some bright warm-toned filters, the overall image appears less oppressive, reflecting positivity, vitality, and hopefulness.
Idea: Beginning this piece, I will focus on the concept of hope, which is the positive side, gradually shifting away from the negative emotions and expressions that were present before. This piece mainly symbolizes my escape from parental control and the attainment of freedom and hope.
Idea: I embody hope and freedom through an upward perspective, and to complete the composition of the photo, I placed tree branches within it. By adding some bright warm-toned filters, the overall image appears less oppressive, reflecting positivity, vitality, and hopefulness.
I think this is ok but I am not reading hope in it. The eyes are a bit odd, did you make them outlined somehow? It looks a little alien. The examples you showed before are better. The dappled light on the face makes an emotion come through. This girl is just looking up, there is no atmosphere of feeling.
回复删除I think you need to do more than just show yourself in a headshot in future pieces. You have two of those already at the beginning and now this one. The others are interesting and conceptual. Your portfolio will score better if you continue in that vein.
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